2009年5月26日 星期二

Karen's Weight-loss Tips

Karen is a fat girl.
She want to lose weight.
She begin go jogging and ethers exercise, and doesn't eat fast food,and begin eat fruit,then after a month,she is so thin.

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  1. Hello,
    1. She want to lose weight. She begin go jogging and ethers exercise, and doesn't eat fast food, and begin eat fruit
    → She wants to lose weight, so she begins to go jogging and eat fruit. Besides,she doesn't eat any fast food.
    2. then after a month,she is so thin.
    → A month later, she becomes thin again.

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